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7.29.05

01:16:23 AM (1118 days, 4h, 30min ago)

I was left to blame...

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  • Music:Randomized I'm staring out the world- Stina Nordenstam
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I painted you a picture

That drew out your name

I drew you a drawing

That showed the world your pain

I wrote you a poem

That showed a wild heart could be tamed

I let you write a story

That showed I was to be blamed

1 Words given.

Posted by Bryce Leo:

"I let you write a story / That showed I was to be blamed"

Oh I love it, it's so well written. I love how the speaker is in control and knows exactly what they're getting, and is letting it happen. It's like when you blame yourself when someone you love gets hurt and you blame yourself. Great job!
8.24.05 @ 05:56:31 AM (1091 days, 23h, 50min ago)

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